Chloe, your elevator pitch was explained very well and it made more sense listening to it. I like the idea of a mix of a hotel for dogs and a fostering type program. It sounds like something a lot of college kids would be interested in. We go crazy over stuff like that. It would be a good stress reliever for a lot of people.
I loved the pace of your pitch, the idea is great, but you should go into the specifics why the people you are talking to might benefit from the product and if they are investors how they might benefit financially. Finally, your idea, while explained well, needs to be fleshed out a little bit more before I feel ready to follow where your pitch is taking me. It feels too conceptual, you doubt it yourself a bit in the pitch. Confidence is key, your idea will work, here is why.
Chloe, your elevator pitch was explained very well and it made more sense listening to it. I like the idea of a mix of a hotel for dogs and a fostering type program. It sounds like something a lot of college kids would be interested in. We go crazy over stuff like that. It would be a good stress reliever for a lot of people.
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ReplyDeleteI loved the pace of your pitch, the idea is great, but you should go into the specifics why the people you are talking to might benefit from the product and if they are investors how they might benefit financially. Finally, your idea, while explained well, needs to be fleshed out a little bit more before I feel ready to follow where your pitch is taking me. It feels too conceptual, you doubt it yourself a bit in the pitch. Confidence is key, your idea will work, here is why.